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Thursday, February 11, 2010
Relationship dynamics
In one lucid moment of
non-righteousness
she managed
to cement his trust.
He and she both knew
now that they’d walk
through hell for each other.
Nice use of the words....
ReplyDeleteI like this a lot!
ReplyDeletePhew, that knowing moment! Where did I go wrong?
ReplyDeletegreat stuff.
ReplyDeleteThis captures a truth often overlooked. Righteousness rarely builds trust, although it sometimes creates followers.
ReplyDeleteThis poem has a wonderful rhythm, and it resonates with me.
Thanks for sharing this.
Tschuess,
Chris