Wednesday, February 17, 2010

The ragged fib

What
can
I say?
You occur
quite ragged today.
Not your tidy self, my sweet elf.

- Leonard "Downright Ragged Himself" Blumfeld

Written to include occur, ragged and tidy from 3WW. Sweet, funny or merely insipid? You be the judge, dear reader.

10 comments:

  1. man, you could be talking about me today.

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  2. I really liked that. Nicely done.

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  3. I am so delighted to find a fibonacci!! YAY!!!

    Great micropoem... and it must be catching because not only are you describing Thom, you've got me covered, too.

    :-)

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  4. I knew my haircut didn't do me any favors. Thanks for the honesty!

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  5. What fun. I haven't written a fib for a while - yours inspires me. A delightful read!

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  6. It worked. I feel self conscious now. And I am not even an elf.

    Clever use of the words, I liked this much!

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