Thursday, February 11, 2010

Relationship dynamics

In one lucid moment of
non-righteousness
she managed
to cement his trust.
He and she both knew
now that they’d walk
through hell for each other.

– Leonard “Fu Tse” Blumfeld (© 2010)

Written to include lucid, righteous and salvage from 3WW.

5 comments:

mark said...

Nice use of the words....

Tumblewords: said...

I like this a lot!

Andy Sewina said...

Phew, that knowing moment! Where did I go wrong?

ThomG said...

great stuff.

Sepiru Chris said...

This captures a truth often overlooked. Righteousness rarely builds trust, although it sometimes creates followers.

This poem has a wonderful rhythm, and it resonates with me.

Thanks for sharing this.

Tschuess,
Chris