Wednesday, February 17, 2010

The ragged fib

What
can
I say?
You occur
quite ragged today.
Not your tidy self, my sweet elf.

- Leonard "Downright Ragged Himself" Blumfeld

Written to include occur, ragged and tidy from 3WW. Sweet, funny or merely insipid? You be the judge, dear reader.

10 comments:

ThomG said...

man, you could be talking about me today.

Angel said...

I really liked that. Nicely done.

Julie Jordan Scott said...

I am so delighted to find a fibonacci!! YAY!!!

Great micropoem... and it must be catching because not only are you describing Thom, you've got me covered, too.

:-)

Daily Panic said...

I knew my haircut didn't do me any favors. Thanks for the honesty!

Andy Sewina said...

Sweet!

Stan Ski said...

We all have our off-days.

Dee Martin said...

darn messy elf. I like that idea

Tumblewords: said...

What fun. I haven't written a fib for a while - yours inspires me. A delightful read!

Inigo Montoya said...

:)

Jay Thurston said...

It worked. I feel self conscious now. And I am not even an elf.

Clever use of the words, I liked this much!