The frozen swirls
may want to speak.
Of clouds, perhaps,
they've been in.
Of drifting clouds
they traveled with,
the lands they
overflew,
the continents.
Tell that to
the tips
of a pair of shoes,
tell it
to frozen grass.
– Johannes Beilharz (© 2010)
Written and posted for "converse with images" (napowrimo #6).
I really liked the rhythm here!
ReplyDeleteVery cool Leonard, very cool...
ReplyDelete...rob
Image & Verse
Photo and poem are great. Quite evocative.
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ReplyDeletedrifting clouds they traveled with the lands they overflew. neat
Love the poem and the photo is fantastic.
ReplyDeletePamela
I agree that the rhythm makes a wonderful frame for the images, shifting them subtly from one to the next. I would love for you to read my take on the art prompt. It is day 6 at http://tasmith1122.wordpress.com/. Please feel free to offer comment and/or suggestions when you visit.
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