Wednesday, April 7, 2010

she's been thinking

there's this guy I kinda like but have no use for
who's been mooncalf lovesick for me for years
and my mooncalf unwed mother girlfriend
who's been looking for a suitable guy for years
so why not get together this guy and my unwed girlfriend

- Leonard Blumfeld

Would that qualify as a tanka about love, funny side up for napowrimo #7?


Aayushi Mehta said...

Definitely would! :D

Leonard Blumfeld said...

Thank you, Aayushi! I take your word for it :)

Robin said...

Wow! I like that idea. Love the expression "mooncalf lovesick."

Marianne ... said...

Very clever and funny tanks!

flaubert said...

Lovely poem!