Look at its eyes! Their
sparkle! Its luscious lips! Its
cheeks! Their modest blush!
– Leonard Blumfeld (© 2021)
Note
Nothing to be added. Could have made it even prettier if I hadn’t limited myself to haiku size.
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Showing posts with label pretty. Show all posts
Monday, January 18, 2021
A pretty haiku
Thursday, February 7, 2019
The can’t trust bird shit haiku
Got shat on today,
but all of the numbers I
drew were shitty duds.
– Leonard Blumfeld (© 2019)
Note
Razor edge of time reporting from the truth front. I was debating with myself whether to make the haiku prettier by using “pretty” instead of “shitty”, but prettiness lost out. After all, it was shit that made me buy two lottery tickets.
but all of the numbers I
drew were shitty duds.
– Leonard Blumfeld (© 2019)
Note
Razor edge of time reporting from the truth front. I was debating with myself whether to make the haiku prettier by using “pretty” instead of “shitty”, but prettiness lost out. After all, it was shit that made me buy two lottery tickets.
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