Working away, cold
feet, cold day, February,
no wild conclusions.
– Leonard Blumfeld (© 2015)
Notes
I needed one more syllable for the last line, so introduced “wild”. But actually there were neither wild nor tame conclusions. So far. Oh, and there's an internal rhyme here, which is frowned upon by haiku purists.
feet, cold day, February,
no wild conclusions.
– Leonard Blumfeld (© 2015)
Notes
I needed one more syllable for the last line, so introduced “wild”. But actually there were neither wild nor tame conclusions. So far. Oh, and there's an internal rhyme here, which is frowned upon by haiku purists.
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