James
Cain's
Cocktail
Waitress is
the potboiler that
is boiling in my pot right now.
– Leonard "Crime Reader" Blumfeld
First fibonacci in a long time ... written upon inspiration by Poets United.
Cain's
Cocktail
Waitress is
the potboiler that
is boiling in my pot right now.
– Leonard "Crime Reader" Blumfeld
First fibonacci in a long time ... written upon inspiration by Poets United.
And I can see your pot is boiling! The brevity and direct voice suit this piece. Nicely done.
ReplyDeleteEnjoyed the imagery in this...
ReplyDeleteespecially 'potboiler that is boiling my pot.'
I can hear my great-grandmother telling my dad, "That's okay as long as you read a classic next." Or maybe that's my voice teaching my son.
ReplyDeleteput out the fire!!!
ReplyDeleteNicely crafted Fib...