I
know
that an
intimate
river is waiting
somewhere to carry me along
infinitely. Where
is that boat,
that oar
it
takes?
know
that an
intimate
river is waiting
somewhere to carry me along
infinitely. Where
is that boat,
that oar
it
takes?
– Leonard Blumfeld ( © 2008 )
Written with intimate, river and waiting as ingredients and inspiration from 3WW in the form of a fibonacci diamond.
I'm trying to decide if indefinitely is a happy word in this... or depressing? At least, in regards to the "after" part of the story. I'm thinking happy.
ReplyDeleteThe key. Wistful, wishful, whimsical. I like the image you bring to this piece.
ReplyDeleteI like that you chose to reinforce the feel of the river by using this form. It really worked well.
ReplyDeleteThere is a Peter Doig painting this would be a great accompaniment for, this little gem. Do you know his work? G and GEM
ReplyDeleteIt is definitely there!
ReplyDeleteReflecting on writers groups