Wednesday, February 20, 2013

James M. Cain, The Cocktail Waitress

James
Cain's
Cocktail
Waitress is
the potboiler that
is boiling in my pot right now.

– Leonard "Crime Reader" Blumfeld

First fibonacci in a long time ... written upon inspiration by Poets United.

5 comments:

Kim Nelson said...

And I can see your pot is boiling! The brevity and direct voice suit this piece. Nicely done.

Mary said...

Enjoyed the imagery in this...
especially 'potboiler that is boiling my pot.'

Libby Meador said...

I can hear my great-grandmother telling my dad, "That's okay as long as you read a classic next." Or maybe that's my voice teaching my son.

moondustwriter said...

put out the fire!!!

Nicely crafted Fib...

Rosemary Nissen-Wade said...

Fun!