Monday, November 1, 2010

The intense immense ditty

Some people like it all intense –
I must admit I find that too immense.

Feelings looming like a tower
can do a lot to overpower.

How about some relaxation –
with plenty of room for imagination.

A steady love is what I crave –
steady, quiet, not one to enslave.

None of these spells and bouts I get from you,
and most of them come without a clue.

Some people like it all intense –
to me that shows a lack of common sense.

– Leonard “Calmly But Surely Intense” Blumfeld (© 2010)

Rhymed and timed for Sunday Scribblings and Immense.

3 comments:

gs batty said...

you are a very wise man. when you find a woman like that let me know if she has a sister

oldegg said...

OK, you have it your way but a bit of intensity puts a little spice into the relationship.

sharplittlepencil said...

Everyone has their ideal relationship, and this poem proves it. Whether speecy-spicy or serene, true love is a well-oiled machine!

It's just that some of us are olive oil types; others prefer WD-40!

Amy Barlow Liberatore
Sharp Little Pencil