I am your star
but my wants are few –
give me yourself,
and you and you.
– Leonard “Dickinson” Blumfeld (© 2010)
Written for Sunday Scribblings. The task was to think of demands one would have as a mega ridiculous superstar on tour. While I’ve definitely missed the subject here, I like this somewhat Emily Dickinsonian ditty in all its simplicity, if I may say so myself.
8 comments:
I like it very much.
as a dirge it sucks!
Loved this totally!
However, If these are your demands, you most definitely can't be a superstar! ;)
Excellent! They are really demanding the identities of those who serve them. Great thought!
This is simply great! I too went off at a tangent.
I like this, and the repetition of "you" at the end.
What a great idea. A simple yet beautiful love poem that turns the meaning of demand into desire.
She must be 'Three Times a Lady'.
sometimes demanding a person's all is pretty demanding too :)
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