Thursday, December 17, 2009

Bleak house

Bleak house,
mean hiccup,
queer lantern.

Bleak approach,
looming hiccup,
queer sax.

Bleak landing,
dazed hiccup,
queer knack.

– Leonard "García" Blumfeld

Written to involve Bleak, Hiccup and Queer from 3WW in various. somewhat García Lorcaesque ways.


ThomG said...

IT's simple, I'll give it that, but there's something when you put it all together it really works.

gautami tripathy said...

I like the repetituon. It works.

ode to percy bisque silley

Tumblewords: said...

Separate or as one, this trio is perfect!

Tim Remp said...

Simple and complex all in one. Nicely written.