Thursday, December 17, 2009

Bleak house

Bleak house,
mean hiccup,
queer lantern.

Bleak approach,
looming hiccup,
queer sax.

Bleak landing,
dazed hiccup,
queer knack.

– Leonard "García" Blumfeld

Written to involve Bleak, Hiccup and Queer from 3WW in various. somewhat García Lorcaesque ways.

4 comments:

ThomG said...

IT's simple, I'll give it that, but there's something when you put it all together it really works.

gautami tripathy said...

I like the repetituon. It works.

ode to percy bisque silley

Tumblewords: said...

Separate or as one, this trio is perfect!

Tim Remp said...

Simple and complex all in one. Nicely written.