tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6529301117709724878.post6908552002077541243..comments2023-07-05T00:54:05.262-07:00Comments on World So Wide: Letter to his older sisterWorld So Widehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03080438999368983042noreply@blogger.comBlogger6125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6529301117709724878.post-82489062574425802492010-04-26T05:47:55.703-07:002010-04-26T05:47:55.703-07:00I like this, and I love the final line!I like this, and I love the final line!Robinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02237296406471830840noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6529301117709724878.post-84495982061962326202010-04-23T10:42:56.848-07:002010-04-23T10:42:56.848-07:00I love how you got all the words in such a succinc...I love how you got all the words in such a succinct piece. I love the idea of a letter, too.1965 Footprintshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08640917815632990664noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6529301117709724878.post-53138994773035369792010-04-22T20:19:43.366-07:002010-04-22T20:19:43.366-07:00This was a really fun read! I loved the format and...This was a really fun read! I loved the format and your inventive use the words, especially "peppered rust reverberating"Kristen McHenryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03467256747399406710noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6529301117709724878.post-24159412075028977272010-04-22T18:01:07.215-07:002010-04-22T18:01:07.215-07:00I agree with L. Monique. Perhaps because of the pr...I agree with L. Monique. Perhaps because of the presence of saffron, pepper in my head was decidedly food.Катяhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16103080395479099740noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6529301117709724878.post-64493034316242451452010-04-22T14:19:33.971-07:002010-04-22T14:19:33.971-07:00"peppered rust reverberating". Nice join..."peppered rust reverberating". Nice joining of words.Lhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06453738281698815360noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6529301117709724878.post-46963780436154067182010-04-22T11:34:13.543-07:002010-04-22T11:34:13.543-07:00What a fun energy in this poem/letter. I never had...What a fun energy in this poem/letter. I never had the nerve to talk to my older siblings like that. I thought they had all the power in the world, saffron or no saffron.<br /><br /><a href="http://juliejordanscott.typepad.com/jjspoetry/2010/04/napowrimo-day-22-poem-squall-blows.html" rel="nofollow"> My Day 22 Poem is "Squall Blows" </a>Julie Jordan Scotthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06558015761690505791noreply@blogger.com