Thursday, April 15, 2010

A whole lot essential

I said now's the time
for something a whole lot essential

I said now's the time
to not just know you're free

I said now's the time
to act accordingly

I said now's the time
for something a whole lot essential

– Leonard Blumfeld (© 2010)

Written for napowrimo #15, where the task was:
In a nice private place, pick out a stanza, or a few lines, that you like from a poem that you don’t otherwise feel was very successful. Say them over to yourself.
Now hum them. See if you can find the tune.
And now sing them aloud. (Who cares if you can sing? You’re in private. And this is poetry!)
Throwing away the rest of the poem, write two more stanzas (stand-alone or connected) that go to the same tune.
The line from a poem (song) I considered not entirely successful (for reasons of triteness) was "Now’s the time / for something a whole lot special."

4 comments:

Wayne Pitchko said...

i like what you did here Leonard....thanks for sharing

Lori Saul said...

This is a powerful message- I think it speaks to accountability and creativity with a conscience. I have so enjoyed reading your wonderful words and discovering your blog. Thank you for your kind comment and dropping by my blog as well. Expressive and moving work!

Red Shoe Artist said...

Great message Leonard

Yousei Hime said...

You had fun with this prompt, didn't you. I am just now approaching it. Not really looking forward to it. We'll see. Thanks for sharing this.